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I'm killing you right now
Just as you're reading this poem
Slowly, ever so slowly...

Every second
tick tock, tick tock
life goes on

Do you know the definition of kill?
'To deprive of life'
What I'm doing to you right now

Every second
tick tock, tick tock
I steal as you continue to read

Slowly, ever so slowly
you get closer to your death
I'm afraid it's unavoidable my love

Every second
tick tock, tick tock
I drain your life away

So as you waste your time
reading this
remember
you're getting closer
and closer
and closer
to the end.

Every second
tick tock, tick tock
my darling, are you dead yet?
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Okay, uh... I don't really have an explanation for this ^^;
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:icondarkmaster58:
*Darkmaster58 Dec 13, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
wow flo
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~SuperFloree Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XDD oddly enough, this came from Liz complaining about homework.
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*Darkmaster58 Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD
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~SuperFloree Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
im not even kidding. My brain went from 'liz is complaining about homework' to 'they're forcing her to waste time on it' to 'they're stealing her life by making her waste time on it' to 'stealing her life means they're killing her' to 'DUDE IF YOU WASTE SOMEONE'S TIME YOU'RE KILLING THEM' ... i have weird thoughts ^^;
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*Darkmaster58 Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD wow
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~SuperFloree Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
XD Yeeup
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*Darkmaster58 Dec 17, 2012  Hobbyist Writer
XD so this is what happens when we leave you alone with your thoughts
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~SuperFloree Dec 28, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol pretty much XD
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Mood: Love !CosmicCorePrincess Dec 13, 2012  Student General Artist
...Flo. I love you. This is an amazing piece, and very insightful with depth. ...Did I mention I love this poem? XD
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~SuperFloree Dec 15, 2012  Hobbyist Digital Artist
lol thanks, I'm glad you lied it! ^^
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